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TwistClock @Twist-Chao06

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Posted by Twist-Chao06 - September 28th, 2008


See i was walking back from school and there was this woman with a shopping trolly filled with... im not sure, but it stunk. so anyway, i walk past her and cough the smell out of my lungs. the next morning i walk up the road. i see the trolly tipped over in the middle of the street, and the stinky remains everywhere.

the woman was no where to be seen. so i walk to the bus stop get on the bus etc, goto school. On the way back i see the trolly has been moved towards another road, and the clothes sluggishedly placed onto the trolly, some looking like there gonna fall out of the top of it. so, we see it and the woman comes out from a car, and a man is shouting at her. i couldnt really hear what he was saying as i was a while away. i got the words "bitch", "whore" and "tramp".

Next morning on the way to school again, im walking up the road and there she is, on the pavement, asleep with some money in a costa coffee cup. i walk past her not wanting to do anything. on the way back from school it looks like some ones tipped over the trolly and kicked all the clothes about. the costa coffee cup is in the middle of the road, flat, and some coins scattered about everywhere. so i decide to stop and look around to see if shes anywhere. nope.

Then i feel some horrible pain and she says to give her my iPod and Money. i say no, and she hits me round the head hard. she then takes my iPod and Money. she starts to run, but its more of a walk than that. i catch up with her and trip her up. she hits her nose, and it starts to bleed. soon theres this pool of blood round where her nose is, and she's knocked out. i take my iPod back but let her keep the £1.20 of change i had. the next day i see her once again asleep in the same position, this time with an empty trolly. the costa coffee cup is all bent and ripped, and my money is in there.

i pick the cup up, twist it the other way and let the money drop onto my hands. i then drop the cup. She wakes and pushes me. she screams at me in an inaudiable voice; i have no idea what shes saying. its all rough and horrible. makes my teeth go on edge. so anyway, i walk away, and she starts to come after me. i walk faster. she walks faster. i Run. She runs. not fast mind, im way ahead of her. im at the bus stop, and a few minutes later i see her struggle around the corner and she sees me.

she comes up to me and says shes sorry for stealing things off me and she asks for some money. feeling sorry, i give her the money. for the next 2 weeks she constantly asks me for money and i give it too her. finally, i get annoyed and say, "Go get a job you stupid tramp". she hits me round the face and i wake up naked on a bed, my arms and legs tied up to the sides. there is a laptop on a desk infront of me. one of the ropes holding onto me are loose.

i untie myself and get onto the laptop. and i write about what happened. so can someone help?

Oh shit someones coming in plea

Edit: PART 2


Comments

Creative mind.

wow, being kidnaped by a hobo, that's not something that happens every day ^.^

The plot thickens :P

you would be more like tobi clock the way it looks

You're really good in making up random bullcrap and making believe.

holy ****

call the cops!!!!!!!!!!!1

fuck you..you bloddy retard

do you think somebody ganna read al that

Looks like 10 people did.

No i didn't believe your crazy story but you should really be a book writer.

beat her with the laptop than find some clothes and run

Believed it until the last 2 sentences of it.

wow interesting story but hard to believe,although you probably would make a lot of money being a author.....

wow on a bed or your bed?

you could also phone the cops before she comes back if she does i don't know leave the room?

This laptop doesnt have skype- holy shit shes comin in

Ooooh, what's part 2 ^.^

can you spare some change

Tits are extrodinary, don't you just LOVE them?

Woah, this is true? :S
LMFAO!
Give me ur I pod and money
I'd say LOLK and puch her in the face or something

OK, uh, take the laptop, throw it at her, and get the FUCK out of there

Wow How crazy that just was. I shouldnt write what happened next because its so crazy.

Also, Ive made stories that are alot better and worse. but awesome none-the-less

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